Zane Viren

[Zane]

Zane Ravis Viren Sexuality: Straight Gender: Male Age: 17 Power: Strength Race: Angel Your C-BOX Alias: Rinka Hair: Black Eyes: Light blue Build: Thin with a bit of lean muscle Skin: pale Height: 6 feet 2 inches Weight: 135Lb Overall Appearance: From his long shaggy black hair to his usually clipped toenails, Viren tends to keep up a pretty neat appearance. It's not like he dresses up all fancy or anything, in fact he probably only owns one suit which is for special occasions, he just makes sure to keep up on laundry and clean up his dorm room. It's pretty difficult to make him laugh, but there's always a smirk or something for those that at least are willing to make an attempt to be funny. More often than not Viren's crystal blue eyes are sparkling either with mischief, or plans for it. His black hair only seems to make the blue all the brighter. Although, on the occasions that he's not in the best of moods he can throw glares cold enough to freeze water on the spot. To him his wings are as hard to break as real bones, but more sensitive to touch since their covered by feathers instead of layers of lean muscle and skin. Their black color matches his hair perfectly and both are soft and smooth, although it actually is possible to 'ruffle his feathers' then they're a bit more fluffy then smooth until he settles down again. Mother: Lilly Viren Father: Travis Viren Sibling(s): Cynthia Viren Other: Dog named Leroy History: Lilly and Travis would always tell Zane what a little angel he was when he was a baby, never cried, always went to sleep quietly when they did, and didn't pull on the dog's ears, but little did they know, they'd hit the nail on the head without even realizing it. Zane laterally, was a little angel, wings and all. Of course, no one learned about the wings until much, much later. That's when everything went to hell... He was only 7 years old, playing in the park with other kids his age. A new little sister had joined the family, only a year younger than Zane. She had long black hair like his, the green eyes of their mother, a beautiful smile that just melted your heart, and though it wasn't quite as pale as his, her skin was quite soft. They got along very well, he would always include her in their games and make sure she never got hurt and like a little duck she'd follow her Big Brother around anywhere. Though at the park... people get separated easily when there are lots of kids out on a beautiful spring day. In the middle of a play-set Zane and his friends were playing on, he looked behind him where Cynthia usually was and noticed she wasn't there anymore. He didn't freak out at first, but after looking around the whole play-set a bit of panic started to rise in his little heart as to where she might be. To get a good view of the park he climbed over the safe rails and up onto the roof and looked in all directions, hoping for a glimpse of his Little sister. It was all he could do not to scream when he found her. She'd climbed up to the top of the big kids' jungle gym, but lost her balance and was dangling at the top, her grip on the bar starting to slip, the fall possibly able to break her neck. In total panic mode, Zane wasn't sure what he was doing but he suddenly jumped off the top of the play-set and was filled with a sudden burst of power. But he didn't land. For a couple seconds he wondered if he were somehow missing the ground, but that wasn't possible. Whatever it was he was glad it was happening as he got closer to Cynthia. She looked shocked at first to see him when he pulled her up and carried her down to safety, but then she giggled and reached behind him. He could feel her petting apart of him that wasn't there before, and looked back to see a pair of wings as dark as his hair. "You really are an angel." She told him, then everything went black. Zane had activated his power: Strength, when he jumped off the play-set and pulled Cynthia up and the sudden drain it caused had been a little to much for his tiny body, causing him to black out. When he woke up it was in a hospital. He lay in a bed, black wings drooping over the side, and a little sister crying on his left side, she'd apparently crawled up into the bed with him. Poking her and asking what was wrong only brought on more tears so he just held her close and told her how everything was going to be alright. After awhile she did calm down and look up at him with big, tear-filled eyes and told him that Mommy and Daddy were letting him get taken away because he'd saved her. She held out a top-hat for him, a silly little gift that only a child would pick out, he loved it. Then, for the first time he cried too, and was filled with loneliness when strangers came to take him away from his Little sister to be placed in a strange new world with only a few things to bring from home. Likes/Strengths: Dislikes/Weaknesses: Overall Personality: After getting taken away from his family Viren became more of a wild card than the perfect little angel he had been. He started picking fights with bigger kids and protecting the ones who were no match for the kids that were picking on them. It's a little difficult to earn his complete trust, but he's willing to give anyone a little bit to start off with. He'll always have a friends back, whether it be in a fight or attempting to raid the cafeteria, no one ever questions his dependability. There are times when he likes to pull some kind of operation to get into the cafeteria, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't, but he doesn't like their food so tries to raid it and cook up his own delicious meal. He's a pretty good chef. Other moments you may catch the sad tune of a violin being played by him in some remote location. Though he may try and act tough sometimes, he's really a softy on the inside. No one but his close friends are allowed to call him Zane either, and even that's a stretch. He's been going by Viren ever since they forcibly enrolled him.

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[Hanna]

You forgot the overall appearance. Otherwise this is very well done . So just fix that up, and you can begin roleplaying!